Helena Writes #1: On intended audience
Helena Clare Pittman, one of the Center’s most dedicated teachers (Writing for Children and Midwifing a Small-Scale Memoir), has written, painted, and taught her entire life. In a new blog series called Helena Writes, she shares a lifetime of wisdom, one pearl at a time. Learn more about Helena through the Center’s Teacher Feature, her reflection on teaching writing, and her artist’s website.
This first post shares Helena’s response to a student inquiring about intended audience. Enjoy!
Writing for Children student: Who is the audience we are writing for in assignment 4? Is the intended audience children? (Maybe this is a silly question considering this class is titled Writing for Children, but I want to make sure.) I believe this is an important part of an author’s mindset as she writes. For example, I could take the same exact story elements- the same characters, the same place, the same motivation, the same problem/resolution, basically the same “story”-and, depending on my audience, write in a very different style for each. I know for me, I would write differently for an audience of children as compared to an adult audience, so I am interested in your answer/thoughts.
HCP: When I write, I really do want it to come from deep within me. Once the writing is on the page, I look at it. Then I ask, who is this for? What’s the voice? I assess where I want to coax the piece.
So when writing began to come to me with older picture book voices, I was surprised, and I went with it. These are certainly some of the stories I feel are my best: The Angel Tree, The Snowman’s Path, (both published by Penguin/Dial), The Call of the Dove (Cricket). Had I stopped the flow of Ruthie Pincus stories, by wondering who I should gear them to, I would have tied myself in knots.
Who is this for? What’s the voice? I assess where I want to coax the piece.
Instead, the most inventive, deepest writing I’ve done, poured out of me. That voice works for adults and children. I have gotten plenty of feedback. It’s a middle grade voice that is also an adult voice. The point is, it’s MY voice.
I’m working on a story now that has developed over time; my sense of humor is a big part of it. Children get it, I’ve read it to groups. So, I’d put it this way–my voice has a way [of speaking] to people of different ages. It’s when I am consciously struggling to write, say, a picture book text, knowing, now, what I know, after 40 years of writing for children, that I can imagine the child I am talking to, from the experience of talking to young children, and sensing the feeling that holds a child’s attention. But I’ve known writers who begin by addressing a particular age, and that makes for a more removed, perhaps, contrived and maybe more commercial approach. This, of course, has its place. It isn’t what I can share with people, though. I can only pass on what I do and what I know from my own work and teaching experience. All approaches are valid. It’s a question, I suppose, of how it strikes you.
All approaches are valid…Find your approach and go for it.
So I would say this–find your approach and go for it. I will do what I always do: read your work and give you feedback to the best of my aesthetic and understanding and capacity. You will know something about yourself I can’t begin to know. Follow yourself in that way, and I will help and guide, no matter what you write.
Hope that helps,
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